Tell Me Again

Posted: August 29, 2010 in Poetry

Tell me again. For I’m lost within.
I wonder again and again as if there is a trend.
I’m lost within once again so tell me again.
Tell me again what it is that’s got me lost within.
Your words are gentle and leave a remarkable memory.
I savor your words carefully as if they’re never heard again.
They replay in my head like a repeat button that’s broke.
I hope in time I’ll hear your soft whisper once again.
Tell me again. For I’m lost within.
I wonder again and again as if there is a trend.
I’m lost within once again so tell me again.
Tell me again what it is that’s got me lost within.
I love your ways and what you have to say.
It opens my eyes up to life as it is today.
I got that feeling as you lay more of my problems to rest.
Your words have put me to the test.
I’ll always favor them never the less.
I wonder again and again as if there is a trend.
I’m lost within once again so tell me again.
Tell me again what it is that’s got me lost within.

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Comments
  1. Jingle says:

    Tell me again. For I’m lost within.
    I wonder again and again as if there is a trend.

    grand opening,
    love the rhymes and the way your words convey your thoughts…

    way to go!
    u put a smile on my face,
    let me know after you are done with the visiting…
    🙂

  2. DiamondsAndDogs says:

    Loved this line … “I wonder again and again as if there is a trend” … great word play

  3. i love your opener, goodjob =]

  4. Brillinant piece of writing, thank you for sharing this. The words seemed to roll from my mouth with ease x
    I am new here; please could you take a look at blog and leave me any feed back on my Poems. I am also in the process of publishing my first Poetry novel, entitled The Jaw, due out in October. Any comments will be so grateful. Kindest regards and keep up the good work, K x
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  5. Dakshima says:

    well done…
    see me on http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/ if you have time..
    xoxo

  6. 700miles says:

    oh how i can relate….an excellent poem….eloquently said….take care, and thanks for the read….

  7. I would love to know what gets me lost within?? hapenns too often…loving your rythm!

  8. nanno1982 says:

    love the shape and rythm of this poem.. more like a sad song..
    I can very much relate to it.. well done.

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